Friday, December 18, 2009

Story about Racism by Jassiel


After you read this story, think about this article.  What myths about immigration do you believe?  

"Go back to Mexico, Beaner! F*&* YOU!"

"Shut up, you racist!" Pancho just wanted to punch them in the face. He wished they didn't exist.

It was a sunny day in Las Vegas, Nevada. Pancho was playing soccer with his friends. Soccer helped him because he was sad; his mom had recently died in a car accident. His mom was going to work; she was just getting in her car when a tow truck with no brakes crashed into her car. He had to move to Texas because his dad had the swine flu; he was in the hospital and the doctors told him that he was too old. He had to stay there because he could die. The only family Pancho had in the U.S. lived in Texas.

After he moved to Texas, his family didn't want him to go to school until he finished grieving the deaths of his parents. They didn't want him to stop studying, so they contracted a private teacher.

After a year passed, he went back to school. On his way to his first day in school, he was happy because he thought that everybody in school was going to be less boring than being stuck at home with his teacher. He was hoping to find a friend. He walked into school and stood by the door looking for a friendly face, but instead of finding a friend, he found racism.

A guy named Ted pushed him; he whispered to him, "Go back to Mexico, Beaner."

Pancho was so mad that he wanted to beat him up.

In math class, Ted was in his class. He pushed him again. Class started; the teacher said, ''We have a new student. Please be nice to him."

Ted said, "I don't respect beaners!"

Everybody laughed.

Pancho asked Tom, the guy sitting next to him, "Where does Ted goes after school?"
Tom told him, "To the football fields. Why do you want to know?"

"I want to beat him up."

Tom asked, "Why?"

Pancho told him, "Because he pushed me."

Tom was Ted's friend, and he told Ted. Ted was so scared that he didn't want to go to go to the football fields that day. Ted went to the office the next day and told the principal about what Pancho said he was going to do to him, but he forgot to mention what he had done to Pancho.

The next day the principal talked with Pancho. Pancho told him what Ted did and how he felt. The principal said, "Okay, no problem. Ted does that with all Mexican students."

Pancho complained to the principal, "Okay, but if he says or does anything again, I'm going to tell you first." Pancho didn't want to get into trouble for fighting, but he wanted the principal to know what was going on. He expected the principal to like this plan. He was in for a surprise.

The principal told him, "Okay, but Ted does that with all Mexican students, and I don't think he's going to stop."

Pancho was so mad that he didn't want to go to school the next day, but his aunt told him to go. When he told her about Ted, she said, "Do NOT get into a fight. Don't get yourself into trouble."

Pancho said, "It makes me mad."

She replied, "If you fight, you will get into trouble whether you are right or wrong. Just ignore him."

When he walked into school, he felt Ted push him again. He told him, "Don't go tell the principal or I will punch you, Little Girl."
Pancho told the principal and the principal suspended Ted for three days. When he was in his way out, he saw Pancho and told him, "You're going to pay for this."
Pancho didn't respond; he wanted to wait until Ted returned to school. In three days Pancho knew that he would beat Ted up. He predicted that Ted would come back mad and wanting to fight. Pancho wasn't worried about the fight; he was worried about punching him too hard and injuring him. For the next three days, he enjoyed school without Ted.
When Ted came back to school, he punched Pancho in the hallway. The fight didn't even wait for the football fields. They fought and fought and fought and fought and fought. Both boys were tired, when Pancho finally punched Ted and he fell to the ground. Pancho's foot was a jackhammer, pummeling Ted's face. Ted's nose was broken and bloody. The blood was squirting from his face and eye.
Tom punched Pancho because he was Ted's friend and he wanted to help him. "Stop! Stop right now!" he yelled at Pancho, ripping at his shirt.
Tom's voice was like a punch. It made Pancho stop kicking and realize what had happened. He looked down and saw blood, so much blood. He thought he had killed Ted. A part of him was happy, but a bigger part was scared.
After two weeks they returned to school, Ted apologized to Pancho, and Pancho said nothing. Ted and Pancho learned that racism hurts everyone. While friendship ends racism, they would not be friends. But, fear can create respect. From that day on, there were no more fights and no more racist remarks.

by ~ Jassiel

22 comments:

  1. I was surprised at the ending. I thought you would make them into friends, but you chose to make it more real. I think this is a very honest story.

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  2. it was really nice about how it all ended but it had to end in a tragety it was when we had and kid from el salvador in mexicans class and everybody try to beat him up

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  3. I really like the story it was a story full of power and I loved it because it teaches others to be equal to one another because we ARE all equal. Some things that I did not like where a few parts; when you said the part of..."They fought and fought and fought and fought and fought." I feel that you used the word FOUGHT too much(just one or two will do it). I really did like it! :D

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  4. I feel bad that his parents died. I just hope they become friends and they will stop racism. I wish that this will stop everywhere in the world

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  5. I loved this story I couldn't stop reading because it was really good and I thought about my school and made some connections,but the rest was unbelivable and amazing.I really think u should publish this it will show people how just starting one thing can cause something huge.

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  6. I liked your story because some times, I feel LIke doing that to some one so that is why Iiked your story. By the way tony wrote this comment.

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  7. Adrian
    I loved your story because it taught him how to respect mexicans.

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  8. jajaja soy perro como tiberio

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  9. I loved this story I couldn't stop reading because it was really good and I thought about my school and made some connections,but the rest was unbelivable and amazing.I really think u should publish this it will show people how just starting one thing can cause something huge.

    Carlos

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  10. it was really nice of how you descrive how they fight and we had a kid from el salvador roberto

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  11. why would someone do that mexicans deserve to be treated the same as americans and thats not fair because americans dont know how it feels to be treated they why they do we shoukd all be treated the same

    liz

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  12. I loved this story and when I readed i thought about my friends and school this was a great story. Nice Job

    Asly

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  13. The story was great but said for pancho but it was shocking how he got called and offended.

    Sergio

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  14. i think it was a good story to teach people about racism.- Valeira

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  15. I sometimes Think I'm lucky that I was born here But still my parents Were born in mexico and you need to respect everyone -Yazmin

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  16. I never knew you were full of imagination. The story you told was very true. I have seen many fights because of this problem. I hope this teaches other people a lesson. I really love the quote at the end. "Racism hurts everyone" Did you really write this.

    JUAN MORILLON

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  17. this story was well written and is important to the readers so that they can understand that racism hurts everyone.

    Marco

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  18. I thought your story was great,I was surprised of the end of your story because I thought that after Ted and Pancho had fought and they went back to school everything would be okay between them, but my prediction turned out wrong. You made the story in a way it would occur in real life. Awesome Story! ~Sandra

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  19. Your story was so realistic, I liked it. Maybe some day you could write a book like this.(I would buy it):-) Maria

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  20. wow! I really liked this story because this actually think that there is a lot of racism and people have to know that racism hurts! >:)
    Zamantha

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  21. Jassiel, this is a great story. I'm sure that everyone who read it learned something new maybe it's something that people would not say wow about but at least they learned something little about how racism can hurt the kid being bullied and the bully being exact - everyone, that's how people change their attitudes, one person learns something shares it with another person and another and another and suddenly what you know is that everyone learned how to change by doing something simple - smile and the bullies or pretty much everyone will make sure they are not hurting something else! Again excellent story and thanks for teaching all of us a lesson. Danicia.

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